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About Me Member Fantasy Artist Dragoonat16/Male/Ireland Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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poetry my first poem

Thu Feb 21, 2008, 1:59 PM
i no this is real korny but its my first poem nd i dont no how to put it up properly so i av to write it here:

I fall into this ocean of misery and spite
I cannot distinguish between whats wrong and whats right
My heart flows as deep as the night
And maybe just suddenly I thought it took flight

Should I run to the open door light?
or should I escape from the mass of fright?
I could even try to reach a new height
As I run in the dark as deep as the night

This world is as cold as the icy air
But what can you do if they don't hear
What if I accept that the world's in a nightmare
And get on with my life with a life of no care

I know this poem ryhmes too much
But what can you do when you think in a flux
Maybe I belong in the deep dark night
Where I can just suddenly take open flight.

well what do you think nd if u no how to put this up tell me pls....!!!!

  • Mood: Sadness

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:iconwonderfullyweirdgirl:
Found you C8<.

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Wrong?There's nothing wrong,I alway's have tea parties on the ceiling.
:icondragoonat:
awww y cant i put my pics up here?? only 2 small ones went up!!!

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